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La.Lo ACS TWEWY-Concept03 by alecosa La.Lo ACS TWEWY-Concept03 by alecosa
this is my third entry for the contest by SQUARE-ENIX
this is my first entry>>>halexxx.deviantart.com/art/La-…
this is my second entry>>>halexxx.deviantart.com/art/La-…
and this is my fourth entry>>>halexxx.deviantart.com/art/La-…
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:iconkairihasegawa:
KairiHasegawa Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
He looks really CUTE X3 joke, I mean so COOLLL :D
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
jajajaja
Thank you very much and Regards!!
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:iconkairihasegawa:
KairiHasegawa Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
sorry for the late reply QwQ
Welcome~(Happy New Year btw)
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
JAJAJA, don't worry, happy new year to you, too..... hehehe
Regards!!
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:iconkairihasegawa:
KairiHasegawa Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
QwQ
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:icondjtyx10:
DjTyX10 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2010  Student Digital Artist
''Son you're hair color isn't a impossible enough color, you need to die it BRIGHT GREEN!'' Lol jokes. I love this piece especially the hair ^^
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011
thanks

the hair color green? jajaja ^^
maybe.... it would work
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:iconzeraphalanx:
Zeraphalanx Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2009
As everyone has said you nailed it perfectly. Good job.:thumbsup:
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner May 15, 2009
thank you very much
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:iconzeraphalanx:
Zeraphalanx Featured By Owner May 15, 2009
You're more than welcome.
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:iconlancerwolf:
LancerWolf Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009
Would you mind if i used this picture in a signature i wana make for a forum?
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009
no there's no problem
you can use it
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:iconlancerwolf:
LancerWolf Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009
Thanks ^^
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:iconinnocentusagi:
innocentusagi Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008  Student General Artist
WOW!!!!! you captured the style perfectly but made it your own at the same time!!!!! sooo cool this should be way more popular! <3
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:iconkit-kat-s:
kit-kat-s Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2008
Lookin' hot. :]
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:iconflamboyant-fathom:
Flamboyant-fathom Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008
Love his hair ^__^
So awesome!
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:iconmartyz:
martyz Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwwwwww *_*
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2008
hheheheheh ??????????
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:iconmartyz:
martyz Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome! XD
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:icontearofdarkness:
TearOfDarkness Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that's great~ :wow:
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:icon20003679:
20003679 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2008
awesome!!
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:iconuzumakiramen:
UzumakiRamen Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
oh, looks a lot like roxas, especially the hair. good job though!! :D
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:iconpsyhcopig:
psyhcopig Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NJ on style emulation...But...Soraxas much? Haha.
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:iconheartsofthedead:
heartsofthedead Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2008
i love him!!
lol when i first saw this..my first comment was "she totally got the style down!!"
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:iconyuuyami-sama:
yuuyami-sama Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008
wow...you've got the style down PERFECTLY.
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:iconyuuyami-sama:
yuuyami-sama Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008
sorry, clicked "send" too many times...
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2008
hehehe no problem ^_^
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:iconyuuyami-sama:
yuuyami-sama Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008
wow...you've got the style down PERFECTLY.
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2008
Thanks!!!
it's good to hear that
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:iconiheartmagster:
iHeartMagster Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
He has the likeliness of sora. Are they by the same creator?
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008
heheh yehhh
the worl d ends with you game i don't know if they are by the same creator
but the character's designer is the same
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:iconiheartmagster:
iHeartMagster Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, ok then. Thats cool :D
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:iconaxel720:
axel720 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
Best of luck with the competition! I like this one and your second entry the best. (I would have liked to see the second entry in colour because she looks great!)

This one looks very KH-esque, so good work, you have your original style in there too which is good. My only complaint is that his arms look a little awkward, but I love the colours and the shading.
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008
thanks
yeah i think that too about the arm
and i'm going to color the second one after the contest if you like to see it
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:iconkuroinotsuki:
KuroiNoTsuki Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
Se ve increíble, no tengo mucho más que decir que eso. Hiciste un excelente trabajo emulando el estilo de Nomura. Ojalá alguno de tus trabajos gane el primer lugar! :D
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008
gracias
pero no creo que alguno gane
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:icondarkbaron1986:
DarkBaron1986 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008  Professional General Artist
Excelente trabajo! siento envidia... con competencia así esta difícil figurar dentro de los seleccionados... buena suerte!
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008
hehe gracias
pero yo tampoco creo que entre en los seleccionados
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:icondarkbaron1986:
DarkBaron1986 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008  Professional General Artist
jaja, ademas de talentoso, modesto!

si la elección fuese por votos contarías con el mío!.

Nuevamente... buena Suerte!
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:icondancefloor-insulin:
dancefloor-insulin Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
This is actually one of the most decent ones i've seen whilst looking through the gallery.
You can see your style of drawing in the pic, but you've also added tetsuya's style in the inking and the colouring, the lines are clean, and i can actually look at this and say i like it.
Well done!
Good Luck! :thumbsup:
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2008
thanks
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:iconkupotwo:
kupotwo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
WHY ARE U SOO GOOD? :XD: i'm jealous :P
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
hehe ^_^
as i say who knows
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:iconencounterblitz:
encounterblitz Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
Hmm, I know of the TWEWY Contest and I had liked to compete in it, too. I don´t remember why I have decided against it, but I think I had some issues with the deadline, and since I am a very slow artist I don´t wanted to rush things out and mess it up like my last UDON contest entry.

However, your pic here looks good to me, the linework is really good and the coloring seems flawless to me, but I have doubts on the overall pic composition and of course I´ll tell you if you don´t mind...

I think it´s a little adverse to cut off the pic at the feet, it may be some kind of style but in my opinion you should consider to make a full body shot out of it including the feet. (That goes for the girl you have done for this contest, too.)

I don´t know obout the original drawing style, so I´m not sure about this, but I think the fingers should have a different lenght.

Finally, the position of his right arm (from his point of view) looks very unlucky to my eyes. The perspective of it is just wrong in my opinion. I think the pic should show a guy in kneeling position, with both of his arms resting on his upper tighs right?
You know, the first 2 things I told you are not major issues, but the perspective of the right arm is, and it should really be corrected for your contest submission.
Since you are using Photoshop, I hope you have all the parts of this pic on different layers and are able to do this without too much trouble (if you care for doing it at all ^_^ ).

I hope I didn´t bothered you too much and that you´ll become one of the winners of this contest. You deserve it...

So long...
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
an there is another error on my draw
the left arm well.... more especific the left forearm it's a litle long
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:iconencounterblitz:
encounterblitz Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
well, i know for sure that i have problems seeing my own errors, so you are lucky to see yours by yourself ^_^
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
wooah thanks for the comment and for the critique
i don't like draw a character alone to full body because i think that makes simple (you know i'm not character designer, i'm a graphic designer so i have so much problems with the composition in the draws)
and for the fingers i think you right
well about the position of the arm i have one rough sketch where the character have the arm just like you say but i really don't like because it will gonna see more simple
i think its gonna be a problem to change the arm because i don't use a tablet and i made the draw in a paper then i inked the lines and i scanned the draw, i have to change all the arm from the inking draw and with that i have to change all the draw itself because the character was to bend more and i have to change that too, and i don't really have time i'm really busy this month and the contest will be in 2 days
and i will be honest, really i don't make this to win the contest (i don't think i'm gonna win) i make this
because i have more watchs and commmets and critics
and thanks again for the critique maybe i change the draw when the contest finish
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:iconcenkaz:
cenkaz Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
love his hair, i particularly like the character design, ahh the nice bold lines and colouring makes it look even cooler though :XD:
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:iconalecosa:
alecosa Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
thank you very much
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:iconcenkaz:
cenkaz Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
no problems
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